"Wild Eyes" or "I could sound like Simon if I wanted to be. It is easy to say I am the American version of Simon when it comes to Literature."

utter shit.. Linking: 3 Comments: 5 Date: 3/1/04 at 1:57AM (1M23h ago) Add Comment This has to be the worst work of fiction I had ever read. Even Jeremy was better than this and he sucks; so tell me SushiSanwich was that one a painful write for you -- come on you do better than that. I will say this much -- the plot sucked, you didn't have much of a plot there and seems like this one was rushed. She rips on me for not being able to write she needs to look at her own work. Personally I think this person should die of cancer -- rectal or stomach cancer, can't decided which one first. I guess it is my time to dish out a little mindfuckery of my own. You will not even begin the reach the levels that I had worked 13 years at.

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	View: Newer Blog | Random Blog | Older Blog Add Comment | End of Comments Posted by: MsKate (Offline) Date: 3/1/04 at 2:29PM (1M11h ago) too harsh. View Blog - View Profile - Visit Website - Send E-Mail - Send ISM Link to Comment Posted by: nickolaus (Offline) Date: 3/1/04 at 7:53PM (1M5h ago) I could sound like Simon if I wanted to be. It is easy to say I am the American version of Simon when it comes to Literature. View Blog - View Profile - Visit Website - Send E-Mail - Send ISM - Link to Comment Posted by: Lazy_Eyed_Psycho Date: 3/3/04 at 11:43PM (28d1h ago) Do you have a lazy eye? I love Lazy Eyes!! I'm a psycho for them!! Nicky, you don't mind f I call you that do you, I think you are HOT! I don't know why these people are so antagonistic towards you, I think your writing is great, it's so dark and gothic and scaary! They are all meanies!! Anyway, you should post more pictures of your face showing your lazy eye! I think it would be sexy!! Have you written a book? Cos I would love to read it!! Host: *.com.au - Send E-Mail Link to Comment Posted by: nickolaus (Offline) Date: 3/4/04 at 1:20AM (28d13m ago) Modified: 3/4/04 at 9:32AM (3w6d) I mind. It is Nick or Nickolaus. Nicky is a pet peeve. I am trying to get a collection together of my short stories but I don't have a pdf program so I can transfer everything to cafepress.com -- since they have a feature on there that helps get a book together. View Blog - View Profile - Visit Website - Send E-Mail - Send ISM - Link to Comment Posted by: B17e Date: 3/4/04 at 10:49AM (3w6d ago) One would think that you would need some kind of critical success to gain the position of the "Simon of literature". Perhaps once you've reached Poe or Lovecraft's stature you can be an asshole to other aspiring writers, but it doesn't seem like you have any basis for criticism that harsh. I haven't bothered to read the piece you're criticizing, it's entirely possible you're right. But damn, man, you need work too before your writing is good enough to justify criticism like that. You're wordy as fuck with more extraneous, pointless phrases than I could ever hope to put together. Maybe you should revisit some of F. Scott Fitzgerald's work and gain a small stylistic influence. If the phrase isn't absolutely necessary and conveys some meaningful detail or description, it shouldn't be there. I'm not an author myself, so feel free thumb your nose at my opinion. However, I am an avid reader, including portions of the horror genre, and you've got a long way to go. Host: *.qwest.net - Send E-Mail Link to Comment Posted by: Lazy_Eyed_Psycho Date: 3/4/04 at 5:50PM (3w6d ago) Oh I'm sorry Nickolaus, I would love to see your collection of short stories, I hope you get this PDF program soon! I would just steal it from work!! ;-) but that's just me. Where do you work Nickolaus? In your email to me you said you had a conndition called "Wild Eye"! That sounds really cool, even though it would make it hard to see... But if you had to have a condition you would want it to have a cool name, hee hee! Any way, look forward to reading more of your HORROR!!! Host: *.com.au - Send E-Mail Link to Comment Posted by: nickolaus (Offline) Date: 3/4/04 at 8:08PM (3w6d ago) Modified: 3/5/04 at 5:53AM (3w5d) Jen, I don't have them on PDF format. I am on disability because of my mental condition, the wild eye means I have the eyes that shift around everywhere. Some people think I am staring at them when I am not. And Ben, I don't see you writing anything profound -- if you don't like what I write; don't read it -- go back to reading your fanfiction. Jen -- you can get a better look at the wild-eyed photo on AuthorsDen. It is cool to be appreciated for what one does. Ben, I do more than thumb my nose at you.