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Friday, December 7, 2007

"Wild Eyes" or "I could sound like Simon if I wanted to be. It is easy to say I am the American version of Simon when it comes to Literature."


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3/1/04 at 1:57AM (1M23h ago)

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This has to be the worst
work of fiction
I had ever read. Even Jeremy was better than this and he
sucks; so tell me SushiSanwich was that one a painful write for you -- come
on you do better than that. I will say this much -- the plot sucked, you
didn't have much of a plot there and seems like this one was rushed. She
rips on me for not being able to write she needs to look at her own work.
Personally I think this person should die of cancer -- rectal or stomach
cancer, can't decided which one first. I guess it is my time to dish out a
little mindfuckery of my own. You will not even begin the reach the levels
that I had worked 13 years at.


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Posted by:
MsKate
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Date: 3/1/04 at 2:29PM (1M11h ago)


too harsh.

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nickolaus
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Date: 3/1/04 at 7:53PM (1M5h ago)

I could sound like Simon if I wanted to be. It is easy to say I am the
American version of Simon when it comes to Literature.

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Posted by:
Lazy_Eyed_Psycho

Date: 3/3/04 at 11:43PM (28d1h ago)


Do you have a lazy eye? I love Lazy Eyes!! I'm a psycho for them!! Nicky,
you don't mind f I call you that do you, I think you are HOT! I don't know
why these people are so antagonistic towards you, I think your writing is
great, it's so dark and gothic and scaary! They are all meanies!! Anyway,
you should post more pictures of your face showing your lazy eye! I think
it would be sexy!! Have you written a book? Cos I would love to read it!!

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Posted by:
nickolaus
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Date: 3/4/04 at 1:20AM (28d13m ago) Modified:
3/4/04 at 9:32AM (3w6d)

I mind. It is Nick or Nickolaus. Nicky is a pet peeve.
I am
trying to get a collection together of my short stories but I don't have a
pdf program so I can transfer everything to cafepress.com -- since they have
a feature on there that helps get a book together.

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Posted by:
B17e

Date: 3/4/04 at 10:49AM (3w6d ago)


One would think that you would need some kind of critical success to gain
the position of the "Simon of literature". Perhaps once you've reached Poe
or Lovecraft's stature you can be an asshole to other aspiring writers,
but it doesn't seem like you have any basis for criticism that harsh. I
haven't bothered to read the piece you're criticizing, it's entirely
possible you're right. But damn, man, you need work too before your
writing is good enough to justify criticism like that. You're wordy as
fuck with more extraneous, pointless phrases than I could ever hope to put
together. Maybe you should revisit some of F. Scott Fitzgerald's work and
gain a small stylistic influence. If the phrase isn't absolutely necessary
and conveys some meaningful detail or description, it shouldn't be there.
I'm not an author myself, so feel free thumb your nose at my opinion.
However, I am an avid reader, including portions of the horror genre, and
you've got a long way to go.

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Posted by:
Lazy_Eyed_Psycho

Date: 3/4/04 at 5:50PM (3w6d ago)


Oh I'm sorry Nickolaus, I would love to see your collection of short
stories, I hope you get this PDF program soon! I would just steal it from
work!! ;-) but that's just me. Where do you work Nickolaus? In your email
to me you said you had a conndition called "Wild Eye"! That sounds really
cool, even though it would make it hard to see... But if you had to have a
condition you would want it to have a cool name, hee hee! Any way, look
forward to reading more of your HORROR!!!

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nickolaus
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Date: 3/4/04 at 8:08PM (3w6d ago) Modified:
3/5/04 at 5:53AM (3w5d)

Jen, I don't have them on PDF format.
I am on disability because of my mental
condition, the wild eye means I have the eyes that shift around everywhere.
Some people think I am staring at them when I am not.

And Ben, I don't see you writing anything profound -- if you don't like what
I write; don't read it -- go back to reading your fanfiction. Jen -- you can
get a better look at the wild-eyed photo on

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cool to be appreciated for what one does. Ben, I do more than thumb my nose
at you.

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Anonymous said...

hahahah

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